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কৃষ্ণকুমারী নাটক । , 8 ay charaeter. We are no doubt actuated by the same passions, but in us those passions assume a milder shape. But hang all Philosophy. I shall put down on paper the thoughts as they spring up in me, and let the world say what it will. Have you received a 'copy of the Odes (Brajan, gana)? Pray, why then are you silent Some fellows here pretend to be enchanted with them. Your verses are good ; if you go on practising, you will succeed. Don't forget that thc 8th should be a long foot. We are reprinting Tilottoma and to tell you the candid truth I find the versification very kancha in many many places. I shall make quite a different thing of the Nymph. Don't scar I shall spoil her Allow me to give you an example of how the melody of a line is improved when the 8th. syllable is made long. I believe you like the opcning lines of the Second Book of the Meghanad. In that description of evening you have these lines আইলা তারাকুন্তলা, শশী সহ হাসি শর্বরী ; বহিল চারিদিকে গন্ধবাহ। How if you throw out the 5tstSgt and substitute Sbts stat you improve the music of the line, because the double syllable g mars the strength of it, Read আইলা সুচাৰু তারা, শশী সহ হাসি শর্বরী And then সুগন্ধবহ যহিল চৌদিকে,